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blu_by_u
24-07-2008, 04:05 PM
How to improve?

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3242/2697431821_0db0f045f7.jpg (http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3242/2697431821_9566266f15_o.jpg)
Dimension
24-07-2008, 04:09 PM
nice one uncle..hehe...:superman2:
blu_by_u
24-07-2008, 04:11 PM
It's not. If it is, why ask for ways to improve? It's OOF, the DOF is too thin and right smack in the middle. :(
mfahrur
24-07-2008, 04:14 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3242/2697431821_0db0f045f7.jpg (http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3242/2697431821_9566266f15_o.jpg)
aic
24-07-2008, 04:17 PM
The one on the right looks a bit 3D. Either way, its really sharp.
CompMac
24-07-2008, 04:25 PM
A different angle of shot would be nice. Shooting in front and about 5 degrees on top of the spider to make a longer shadow.

Just my 2 pence.
mfahrur
24-07-2008, 04:26 PM
some layers and selective dodge...
blu_by_u
24-07-2008, 04:29 PM
Now that's what I call improvement.. Nice
aic
24-07-2008, 04:29 PM
The last pic is too dark around the edges.....As if the spider decided to peek.
red
24-07-2008, 10:50 PM
get another source of light to compensate the shadows. it may be much weaker than the primary yet would give a desirable effect.

suggestion- use the redflector.
CompMac
24-07-2008, 10:51 PM
The master has spoken...